At the suggestion of several folks on this blog, I sent the following to NPR as a submission for their commentaries:
“Oh, Da! It’s the moon!”
by Peter David
There are certain rides at Disney World where, if you don’t go on them while you’re there, you just don’t feel like you’ve actually visited the Magic Kindom (although your next month’s Amex bill will likely confirm that you did..) It’s different rides for different folks. In my case, it’s always been the Peter Pan ride…voyaging in a two-person pirate ship high over a scale model of night-time London and journeying into and through Neverland with its pirates, mermaids and Indians.
As it so happens, it was also the favorite ride of a woman named Carol Kalish. Carol was many things to me…my former boss. My mentor. My friend. And in a Peter Pan-ish way, she never truly grew up and grew old, because she died unexpectedly at the age of 38, fourteen years ago this September.
So I was very interested in how her namesake-my two and a half year old daughter, Caroline-would react on her first excursion on that same ride during a recent vacation.
As we stood in line, I pointed at the passing pirate ships and told Caroline we were going to fly. “Fly?” she said uncertainly. “Fly in ships?” She wasn’t sanguine about it at all. When we clambered into the vessel (my wife, Kathleen, and my older daughter, Ariel, having gone on ahead) Caroline clutched tightly and nervously to the lap bar that settled on us. Her eyes went wide as we moved forward, up, and then appeared to be hurtling into thin air (naturally she didn’t look up to see that we were being carried on an overhead track.)
“See, Caroline? We’re flying,” I told her, and pointed at the “night sky” over London. “See? There’s the stars. And there’s the city, way down there!”
“Stars,” she whispered in astonishment. And then, as we went higher, she suddenly pointed and gasped in delirious joy, “It’s the moon!”
Sure enough, just to our left was a large full moon. The silhouettes of Peter, Wendy et al were moving across it as it turned. I wrapped my arm around Caroline just to keep her anchored. And she stretched out her little fingers, desperate to touch the glowing lunar orb, not quite succeeding. Completely enthralled in Disney magic, she cried out, “Oh, Da! It’s the moon!”
She watched the rest of Neverland with amazement. And although there were any number of rides and character greetings she enjoyed, that was the one moment in the park where she was totally swept away by pure fantasy-made-real. For a few seconds, one little girl sailed through the stars in a pirate ship and came justthatclose to touching the moon.
If Carol was watching through her eyes, I think she liked what she saw.
The response I received?
Dear Commentator:
Thank you for your submission of a commentary to MORNING EDITION. Because of the number of unsolicited commentaries we receive, we find it is impossible to reply individually in a timely manner, and we apologize for the prepared response.
Unfortunately, we will not be able to use your commentary on Morning Edition, but we encourage you to read on anyway, in case you would like to try again.
This was followed by specifics for their guidelines, all of which my submission already met.
So for those of you who think that being a published writer guarantees no more form rejections…
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